Feedback on common app essay - prompt 2

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone like to read it?:)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it! PM me</p>

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<p>bomp-----------------</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too if you like.</p>

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<p>I can read it .</p>

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<p>Ill read it! </p>

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<p>The essay, was brilliant . </p>

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<hr>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>