Feeling very unconfident about my CommonApp essay please help!

My prompt is: The lessons we take from failure can be fundamental to later success. Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

I feel like my essay is missing something insightful or some kind of lesson learned that has helped me grow as a person. If you would like to read over my draft please respond!

I’d be happy to read it.

I can help.