finally finished my essays. Help?

Applying to College
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<p>they are all rough drafts. I need some help tell me if they are good and such. Pm if interested. all criticism is welcome</p>

<p>and, bah i still have 4 more write in 3 days... :(</p>

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<p>i</a> can help</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>yea ill read it</p>

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<p>I'll look it over, sure</p>