<p>Hi everyone,</p>
<p>I wanted some input on my college essay. I think it's pretty good in terms of writing, but I've been getting completely divided responses from my readers: some people REALLY like it, while others say that it needs quite a bit of work. Would anyone (people already in college, alumni, parents, etc.) mind taking a quick glance at it and giving me some feedback? </p>
<p>Thank you for your help!</p>
<p>Pm it to me!</p>
<p>I’m interested. PM me.</p>
<p>Ill take a look. Just pm me lol</p>
<p>Sent from my GT-P1000 using CC</p>
<p>PM it to me as well </p>
<p>Sent from my GT-S5360 using CC</p>
<p>Thank you all so much for the offers…but I just found out that I need to post 15 times in order to send a PM. Oh gosh…I’ll get to work on that!</p>
<p>PM me once you get 15 posts :P</p>
<p>pm it to me too!</p>
<p>try PMing me- I’ll see if I can help.</p>