good or bad? who wants to read my brown supplement

College Essays
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<p>if you can just give some quick inputs...or just tell me if its good or not</p>

<p>also the prompt says it should be less than 500 words, mine is about 416. do you think i should make it longer?</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

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<p>anyone? 10char</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>