grammar check, pls?

<p>Can someone please check grammar on my Dartmouth waitlist essay? Pleeeease?</p>

<p>I’ll do it. All I’ve got is a couple of Netflix DVDs to tackle today. BTW, I’m a parent and, by profession, an editor with more than 25 years of experience. So you could do worse is what I’m saying. How does this work, anyway? You send me a private message? This doesn’t violate any CC rule, does it?</p>

<p>^ That’s what happens. He’ll PM the essay to you so you can respond. </p>

<p>If you want, you can send it to me as well.</p>

<p>I would love to read it. I’ll be applying for college next year, so it’d be great to read other people’s essays.</p>

<p>I’m also really good at grammar and English (35 on the ACT English section).</p>