GRAMMAR GURU/POLICE needed :)

<p>Hi I have completed an essay, and I am looking for a few people who are very alert and selective when choosing words/phrases.</p>

<p>Basically, I have a few sentences that may sound awkward, and I appreciate your help in correcting/improving/vetting them.</p>

<p>Thanks if you are able to volunteer! No age limit, but please help only if your foundation is very strong (obviously mine is not).</p>

<p>Please pm me or simply reply here if you are interested. Just a few sentences, but I wish to follow-up if possible.</p>