Hard Grammar Question -- Calling all comma experts

<p>Which is correct and why... </p>

<p>A. Here I was, on a trip in the big city, New York. </p>

<p>B. Here I was, on a trip in the big city New York. </p>

<p>C. Here I was on a trip in the big city, New York.</p>

<p>D. Here I was on a trip in the big city New York. </p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

<p>Wow. This is tough, even for a grammar nazi like me. </p>

<p>I am not 100%, but I believe it is A. </p>

<p>“On a trip…big city” is a prepositional phrase. Thus, a comma is required. Additionally, “New York” is nonessential information, which means it also requires the comma.</p>

<p>@kns1444 that’s what I was thinking too. :slight_smile: </p>

<p>This isn’t even an ACT question haha just need help with my college essay, but knew CC would know. ;)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I don’t have much context, but I want to ask:</p>

<p>Why are you </p>

<p>“on a trip IN the big city”</p>

<p>versus </p>

<p>“on a trip TO the big city”?</p>

<p>My reasoning is that a trip would be a voyage TO a place, not a voyage IN a place.</p>

<p>If you could explain the context, that would be helpful.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Answer? Rewrite the sentence to avoid the clumsy construction.</p>

<p>I think it’s a</p>

<p>Read “Eats, Shoots & Leaves” by Lynne Truss and you’ll never have an issue with commas again!</p>

<p>A is the most right, I think, but it’s an awkward sentence. You don’t want to end a sentence with a little phrase like that. If I were writing this in an essay, I’d probably write something more like: “Here I was, in New York! The Big Apple itself!”</p>

<p>There I was. Not here I was.</p>

<p>A is correct but sounds awkward. I would go with C. Definitely not B or D, however.</p>