<p>I think that ending by telling harvard to accept you and then you rejecting it makes you sound arrogant. Maybe try rewording? I hope the rest of your essay doesnt come of too arrogant</p>
<p>The funny thing is, nobody knows who he is “rejecting” or why. lol. He is just rejecting for no reason. lol</p>
<p>its obviously not even serious. thats a waste of an application fee</p>
<p>Are you trying to say that you’ll be rejecting the degree of control you’ve allowed the Harvard admissions officers to have over you? </p>
<p>If you were going in that direction the idea has promise but it still seems a bit risky. </p>
<p>I have nothing more to add. Everyone else has pretty much summed up my opinions on style, diction, etc.</p>
<p>It’s funny when people use words they don’t know :)</p>
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<p>Agreed. But, I still find this quite amusing.</p>
<p>You may WANT to write this conclusion, but you’ll just be wasting your money on application fee if you do. Try again. This time, don’t give them such an easy reason to reject you.</p>
<p>“you guys, this is just a bad attempt at ■■■■■■■■. don’t bother”</p>
<p>^Probably correct. If it’s not, man, take that thesaurus, roll it up, and smoke it, because it’s not doing you any good as of right now.</p>
<p>LMAO did anybody else choke on their water at the “prevalently known as harvard” part</p>