Decision: Waitlisted
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2200 780 WR, 700 M, 720 CR
ACT (breakdown):n/a
SAT II: 750 E-Bio, 760 US History, 700 Math 2
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.81 (had some b’s) 4.36 W
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A, probably top ten
AP (place score in parenthesis): US history (5), Art History (5), Eng Lang (5), Bio (4), AP Enviro, AP Lit + Comp, AP Calc AB, AP Poli Sci, AP Econ
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: 4 APs and honors class
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar w/ honors, National novel writing award, national merit commended, people to people international award (not that important), online writing awards, sports awards
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Varsity soccer and track (4 years + sprints captain),
Gender-sexuality alliance (pres + founder),
National novel writing month(s) -( won an award for this) -
Editor and writer of student-run lit magazine,
People to People Student Ambassadors,
Junior classical league (just a member),
Published on juke pop novels website + articles in Diverse Voices Quarterly, Blue Pencil and Teen Ink -
I also did a lot of club sports and got state/regional recognition. Not recruited though.
Job/Work Experience: N/A
Volunteer/Community service: LGBT Center OC, Heifer International, Hands for Africa, Food Bank, Gay for Good
Summer Activities: Stanford Summer College (took writing and sociology classes) - As in both, People to People Student International Trip to Italy Spain and France, travelled to Tanzania one year and track-trained for one.
Essays: common app is 10/10 - I wrote about how my afro helped me come out of the closet
Harvard Supplements:
–Extracurricular short: talked about my experience writing a narrative novel about QWOC character like me
–Additional Essay: talked about how embracing my queer identity led me to start an LGBT organization
Teacher Recommendation:
Art History teacher: 10/10 I participated a lot in her class and she really liked me + Art history was my favorite subjects last year
Bio teacher: probably 7-8/10 because I did well in his class but I wasn’t his favorite student or anything, but I stand out a lot in general.
Counselor Rec: Ehh… I would say 8-9/10 because I stand out a lot among my class and I had a really good interview with her but she has so many students so I’m not really sure.
Additional Rec: Fiction writing professor from stanford: 10/10 - I talked to her a lot over the summer and she helped me edit/polish a lot of my creative writing work. She knows me very well. (didn’t get to send this one to brown)
Interview: Not bad nor good. I said what I wanted to say, but our connection wasn’t very fluid.
Other
I submitted an additional writing sample - first two chapters of my novel (which won an award) which talked about the identity of an African American f–>m trans teen growing up in suburbs. Only sent this to HYPS - dunno if it really made a difference.
Applied for Financial Aid?: marked yes but ended up not applying.
Intended Major: Humanities
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: SUPER competitive public school probably will work against me.
Ethnicity: I’m mixed - half Nigerian and half American (so I put down African-American)
Gender: XX
Income Bracket: ~200k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM, and I’m not sure being queer counts but I emphasized that too in my app
Reflection
Strengths: ESSAYS ESSAYS ESSAYS - if the rest of my app wasn’t strong enough, my essays got me a second chance. Also SAT scores and unique extracurriculars - but honestly i think my essays played the biggest part.
What you tried to focus on in your application - any hooks you tried to make for yourself: QWOC who wants to be a writer? Idk.
Weaknesses: GPA probably, not a lot of super prestigious awards, super competitive class, I have a lack of work experience.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Essays, unique ECS, prevalent academic focus
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: still waiting on all the ivies except Dartmouth
-Accepted to: Stanford, Yale, Brown, Cornell (CAS), NYU, Tufts University, Barnard College, UCLA, Emory University, Sarah Lawrence College, UCSB honors program, UC Santa Cruz Regents scholar, University of San Francisco, Boston University Honors
-Waitlisted: Columbia and Harvard
-Rejected: UC Berkeley, Princeton, Upenn
Your “Big Red” factor - the most unique thing in your application: … Probably just getting a second look because my essays are pretty good, but I don’t know. College admissions are part crapshoot.
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