Having trouble deciding which essay to submit

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I'm having trouble deciding which essay to submit to the Common Application out of two choices. The first one is about "describe a moment in which you experienced failure" and is about how I lost a writing competition. I like my style for this one, but it meanders -- although I can always cut it down. </p>

<p>The other essay choice is the first one, about "personal identity", and is about how I overcame an incredible vision deficiency. It's shorter, but I don't like the writing as much. </p>

<p>Which one should I go with? If there's not enough information I can always provide more.</p>

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<p>Post the Essays</p>

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<p>Don’t post them… If others are interested, you should offer to PM them (if you want to). </p>

<p>Do you still like your first essay after shortening it? Which essays reflects you better?</p>

<p>Also, I would post this into the College Essays section of the forum.</p>

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<p>jibler is correct: don’t post essays and please take some time to look at the forums offered here on CC and post on the most appropriate one in order to get the best results.</p>