Help me with my Why Reed essay , plz!

<p>I've finished writing the most important ( and agonizing) essay for Reed. Would you read mine and give me your opinions. Is it enough for Reed's acceptance?
PM me or leave an email address, I'll send it to you.
Thank you.</p>

<p>Yes, send it… I have currently read a looooot of essays…!</p>

<p>I’d read your essay. I’m currently a freshman at Reed.</p>

<p>Send it to me, i’ll read it.</p>