Help on editing my supplement essay

<p>I just wrote one of the short answer supplement essay for Columbia University and I was hoping someone can edit it for me and give me advice on it, I'm new to this website so I do not know how to work it. Let me know if someone can help making this essay perfect and how I should give you the essay-through email or something? Thank you so much!!</p>

<p>I’ll take a read.</p>

<p>Send a private message on this site. Under no circumstance should you post it on the forum. If people want to read PM it to them.</p>

<p>I will read it!</p>