Help with Columbia ED essay? Can someone review it for me please? Thanks

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<p>Anyways, if anyone is interested in reviewing my essay, please post below or PM me :) It's approximately 500 words... is that too long?</p>

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<p>sure PM it. the limit’s 500 words but as long as it’sonly a few over, you should be fine.
care to read my essay? <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/princeton-university/793587-who-wants-critique-my-princeton-essay.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/princeton-university/793587-who-wants-critique-my-princeton-essay.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>PM me… I’m a junior and would be more than happy to comment.</p>

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<p>thanks guys, PM’ed
anyone else? i’ll be glad to critique any essays you need as an exchange, just PM it to me!</p>

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<p>pm me. i’ll give it a good read</p>

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<p>I will read it and provide feedback</p>

<p>Julia</p>

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<p>I replied to your PM.</p>

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<p>e-mail it to me at <a href="mailto:girlspanky@windowslive.com">girlspanky@windowslive.com</a> will be an honest critique :D</p>

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<p>i’ll read it over for you :]</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll give you feedback!</p>

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<p>id like to read it!</p>

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<p>Hey can we do an essay exchange? I will edit yours and you edit mine?
I’m not applying to Columbia, so feel free to PM me. I need readers to critique my personal statement too</p>

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<p>i’d like to read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll critique your essay if you critique my USC one :slight_smile: PM me.</p>

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<p>it’s not too long, but PM me it to me along with the topic of course =P</p>

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<p>I’ll give you feedback. PM!</p>

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<p>PM it over and I’ll give feedback</p>

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<p>i am both a ap lang and ap lit student and do very well i would love to help u polish ur essay</p>

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