Hi, guys, I wrote an essay that I think is really strong, but I would love some conceptual advice if anyone’s willing. I also can’t really figure out the perfect way to end it.
I’ll read it for you, just PM me 
Please, both of you: offer your essay only to adults with an established posting history. You can click on a name, then on “threads” and you’ll see the threads the poster has started. You’re looking for evidence of a spouse, or kids, or a career-- anything that shows that the adult who has been posting here for ages isn’t a kid looking to take ideas from your essay.
Sure. PM me.