<p>I have to turn in one of my college essays soon and I've re-written it three times and I'm just not sure if it's good enough. Does anyone want to help read it and give me thoughts or comments to improve it? Thanks a bunch!</p>
<p>I have to turn in one of my college essays soon and I've re-written it three times and I'm just not sure if it's good enough. Does anyone want to help read it and give me thoughts or comments to improve it? Thanks a bunch!</p>