Hopes of being the first to go to college..!

College Essays
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<p>Hello guys. Well in december i turn in my college application and it looks like ill be the 1st in my family to go to a university but i would like for anyone if they could read and give me the most stagering critique and tips about my essay. A extra hand of help and a different point of view always help :).. ty :)</p>

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<p>im in the same boat as you are, first in my family to go to college, pm your essay, ill pm you mine :)</p>

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<p>First to go to college, eh? Congrats! :)</p>

<p>I’d be glad to read your essay; I’m already in college, and I really have nothing else to do. :)</p>

<p>PM it or email it over at <a href="mailto:bleucrimson@yahoo.com">bleucrimson@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>If you need additional feedback, PM me your essay</p>