Writing essay is not my speciality, so i need someone to criticize my Why Vanderbilt essay
anyone willing to do so can AIM me, PM me in yahoo messenger or email me at <a href="mailto:afroed@comcast.net">afroed@comcast.net</a>. i’m not going to make that mistake and post it on the board for everyone to read it but please help me with this one
<p>send it to me, ill take a look</p>
<p>ya me 2------</p>
<p>i sent it, do anything to it, peruse it, criticize it, torture it. thx</p>
<p>hey don't email me bak (jus closed the browser) tell me wut u think about wut i said on here</p>
<p>ooh was it you that emailed me? if it was you thx i really appreciate ur advice, i just have to work more on it</p>