How is my app so far and how can i improve it?

<p>I’d like to point out that I am interested in all the clubs I am currently in except for key club and foreign language club (I’m mainly in this club because a lot of my friends are it and all we do is go to restaurants haha). I haven’t joined FBLA up till now because Im not interested in business but it does have the name leader in it so I was kind of wondering if I should join. The other clubs I mentioned you can’t be in until you’re a junior but most of them are for volunteer hours.</p>

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<p>Anyone have any suggestions on other colleges I should consider?</p>

<p>Also forgot to mention I have a small business stringing tennis rackets. Also am I first generation if my parents went to college in a different country?</p>

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<p>lower expectations. problem solved.</p>