<p>yeah that sounds quite a bit better than mine...i used typical arguments with no scientific evidence at all, just reasoning.</p>
<p>Also, does anybody know if the comments you get for your essay are original, or if they are they kind where the reader fills in a scantron bubble next to a certain, pre-written comment to add it to the comments on the essay. My comments all seemed suitable, and they were all positive... I wish I could know what I did wrong!</p>