<p>Hey guys.</p>
<p>I just finished my 4 NYU personal statements and was wondering if you guys would be kind enough to take a look at them.</p>
<p>The Last Personal Satement I went over by 80 Characters, so I was wondering if anyone could help me fine tune it as well.</p>
<p>Thank You so Much Guys, I really appreciate it.</p>
<p>-Trav</p>
<p>u can send them to me w/the prompts</p>
<p>Sure, pm me. :)</p>
<p>your box is full.<br>
they all look good to me.<br>
the last one : The captivating effects music has on me have always left me wondering why music makes me smile or get goosebumps.<br>
cuts like 8 words? hope thats enough. good luck</p>
<p>sure pm them over</p>
<p>If you need help, I'd be happy to help.</p>