I need feedback!

College Essays
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<p>I am in dire need of some critique for my essay. I just finished writing it so it is a very, VERY rough draft. </p>

<p>I would appreciate ANY sort of help :) I will PM you my essay upon request. Thanks!</p>

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<p>ill read it.</p>

3

<p>I'll take a look too.</p>

4

<p>Thank you =)</p>

5

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<li>bump * Anyone else?</li>
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6

<p>send it over</p>

7

<p>i'll like to read it xD</p>

8

<p>i'll take a stab at it. PM me?</p>

9

<p>I'll read it. Pm me.</p>