I need help on my short answer.

[JDorian]

<p>I gotta reword some things and link sentences better. Can anyone help me out a little?</p>

<p>Topic: Band.</p>

[JDorian]

<p>No takers? Anyone?</p>

[gery_sun]

<p>pm me I will try to help</p>

[RealM]

<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

[ed1229]

<p>PM me too!</p>

[blondie888]

<p>PM me if you'd like.</p>