<p>hey guys this is my first time posting.
i wrote a univ. essay and i wanted ppl to proof read and want some feed backs~</p>
<p>topics are relating leadership and community awareness</p>
<p>need help ~!!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>i will read it.</p>
<p>i am applying to carleton, macalester, grinnell, whitman, reed, lewis and clark, university of washington, and western washington university.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. Junior now, but a prospective English major with a sharp eye for grammar errors.</p>
<p>i sended email to you</p>