Hello! I’d highly appreciate it if someone would read my college entrance essay and offer advice for improvement. Please PM if you’re interested! Thanks!
I don’t proofread myself, but if you send it to someone be sure it is an experienced (you can tell by the number of posts) and preferably an adult (you can read some responses and figure it out) reader.
You could send it to me if you want.
Please do NOT send it to another high school student. Click the person’s name and check both the threads they’ve started and their replies. You should see evidence of a career, a spouse, kids… anything along those lines to indicate that they’re an adult.
Rather than (or in addition to) using CC for this purpose, consider a teacher, parent or other skilled adult you respect and trust will provide a valuable critique. Set your feelings aside. Anyone you trust who really cares about you will be trying to help you accomplish your end goal. Not always fun but very useful.
How about you upload your essay here so that me and other people can go over it?
^^^^With all due respect to a new member, …Worst idea ever.
That opens the door to plagiarism.
Agree with bjkmom. Do not share the essay on public forums, nor with other hs kids who have very limited experience, if any.
MODERATOR’S NOTE:
How about you don’t? For all the reasons listed above.