I wrote an essay about hair! Yes, hair! Please read

<p>Can someone please read my essay?</p>

<p>It's more than just about hair, I promise! The ethnic group that I come from has very unique hair and I had to get adjust to living in the US with it when I was little and even as a teenager. </p>

<p>I will send it by DM to anyone who’s kind enough to read it</p>

<p>It need editing, but I just want to know if the general idea flows or works </p>

<p>I’ll read it, sounds interesting</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>@irlandaise‌ @nycutie786‌ Thanks!</p>

<p>hello??? I will read other’s essays</p>

<p>I’ll read if you can read mine as well! :D</p>

<p>Are you @Melissawilliams or do you two coincidentally have the same exact idea?</p>

<p>@ribbonroad224‌ I guess great minds think alike, but I’m sure this chick and I will have completely different essays, even if it’s about hair</p>

<p>Oooo, sounds interesting. I’d love to give some feedback if you need some still.</p>

<p>I would love to (I am also writing a similar type essay), but I won’t have time until after Saturday to give you specific grammatical/stylistic feedback if you want that. I can give you input on how I think the essay works as a whole. :)</p>

<p>I’d like to read it. I read the other one about the hair and it was amazing.</p>

<p>Hey I was tagged here, and yeah we have basically the same idea. Best of luck on yours! I’d be happy to read it if you’re willing, but that might be weird since we’re both applying.</p>

<p>I’ll read it too</p>

<p>I would love to read it! It sounds interesting! :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it and provide feedback!</p>

<p>I’ll give it a read and give some comments.</p>

<p>sounds cool i’ll read it if u need help</p>

<p>that sounds really interesting; i’ll read it!</p>