<p>Hi,</p>
<p>I finished my work assignment about a week and a half early and I have a lot of time to kill between 8-6:30 everyday. So if you want, you can send me your essay and I will read it for you and give detailed, constructive feedback. I'll also help you come up with topics for essays, help you to structure it cohesively, and help you with those dreaded "Why Us?" questions. I usually charge kids in my neighborhood for this, but because you're special, I'll do it for free =)</p>
<p>In case you're wondering about me, I'm a sophomore at Yale but I applied to a LOT of colleges and wrote lots of essays. Last summer, I worked with guidance counselors from local high schools to help their students with their essays. I also do a bit of writing and editing at school. </p>
<p>So PM away to me if you want. Please tell me the prompt, what schools applying to/looking at (it helps with developing the tone of your essay), and a little bit about yourself.</p>
<p>Cheers</p>