<p>Hey guys I was wondering if you would take a look at my ILR essay. I've never really shared an essay with anyone but I'm hoping you guys can give me some good feedback.</p>
<p>i'd read it for you, give some feedback since i'm not applying to ILR</p>
<p>i ll read it</p>
<p>ill read it
send it to <a href="mailto:TheGreyThing06@aol.com">TheGreyThing06@aol.com</a></p>
<p>I'll read it. I attend ILR now (Freshman).</p>
<p>Send it to <a href="mailto:cam348@cornell.edu">cam348@cornell.edu</a></p>
<p>Hi 8dbordel, I've helped several ivy league applicants in the past four days with their admissions essays including thisisspartaaa (Upenn), jenkster (Stanford), SandyRun (Princeton), tonyspizza (Brown), olawunmi8 (Stanford), and several others. PM them for proof.</p>
<p>If you need an additional critique, feel free to PM me.</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>