Is it GREAT!!!! Need Feedback :-)

Transfer Students
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<p>Would anyone like to give me feedback on my common application short answer extracurricular essay?
I can PM my essay.</p>

<p>Thanks :-).</p>

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<p>Sure I'll give it a read. I just finished mine.</p>

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<p>Ok, I'll take a look at it as well.</p>

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<p>ya suure...i will like to take a loot at it. u can pm it to me too!!</p>

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<p>pm me yooo</p>

<p>i am the essay master</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it, PM!</p>

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<p>Sure thing, PM it to me and I'll give it a read.</p>

<p>P.S. - I'll actually give some constructive criticism too.</p>

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<li>Dartmouth dude -</li>
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<p>pm me if you need help
i am willing to give out some criticism too</p>