Is my essay too weird and pointless?

College Essays
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<p>I just finished a rough edit of my first essay (out of many). I would appreciate if someone could take the time to read it and let me know if it's worth improving, or if I should just write another essay. Thanks so much!</p>

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<p>i will read it. PM me</p>

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<p>Pm...........</p>

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<p>Email it to me:</p>

<p><a href="mailto:elegant.ecstasy@yahoo.com">elegant.ecstasy@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>sure please PM me.</p>

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<p>I lurve weird essays and I definitely wrote some that were pointless before getting my final one done (last year) so I'll be willing to read it. PM it to me. And just to warn you, I'm working 9-5 tomorrow so I won't get it back to you until tomorrow evening at the earliest.</p>

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<p>PM me. I'll read it tomorrow morning.</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM it. I'll reply soon. =]</p>

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<p>i'll be more than happy to read it.</p>

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<p>pm me (10 char)</p>

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<p>I guess I can read it, no problem.
Send me a PM.</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

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<p>You can send it over.</p>

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<p>I would read it, if you want, college class of '12.</p>

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<p>If you need another opinion, I'd be more than happy to read it over.
PM me or email me at <a href="mailto:dorkerrhea@gmail.com">dorkerrhea@gmail.com</a></p>