Is my Northwestern Essay terrible?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Northwestern University
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<p>Hi everyone:</p>

<p>I really need help with my Northwestern essay. Could someone read my essay. I will PM it to you </p>

<p>NOTE: ONLY STUDENTS THAT ARE NOT CURRENTLY APPLYING ARE ALLOWED TO READ MY ESSAY. I WILL CHECK PAST POST. </p>

<p>Thank you!!</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to help.</p>

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<p>PM it to me!</p>

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<p>Thanks guys but I actually don’t think Im going to do that sorry, but I’m just really nervous about someone copying it. :frowning: Thanks for the offer though. :)</p>

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<p>I am already in college, soph, GW. Just like to critique. Don’t need to copy at all. If you decide to change your mind I am here, but beware I am brutally honest, I don’t sugarcoat.</p>