<p>anyone willing to critique it?</p>
<p>i will help you</p>
<p>I'd critique too, if you need another opinion.</p>
<p>PM/ email me - i'll critique it</p>
<p>pm me...I will critique</p>
<p>go ahead and pm me a copy. I'll have a read of it on Monday.</p>
<p>I will offer criticism as well.</p>
<p>sure id be happy to critique</p>
<p>sure send it over</p>
<p>ill be willingn to read it, although I'm just a senior like you. Maybe we can swap essays</p>
<p>i'll do it</p>
<p>even though i didn't apply to caltech (already 2 years ago), i'll be happy to look at it. pm me</p>