<p>I wrote the picture essay (I'm using it mores as a personal statement right now.) and I was hoping someone could edit it for me ASAP. It is short right now and I have no idea of how to end it so I would love suggestions from editors. Please and thank you.</p>
<p>I can take a look if you want. PM me!</p>
<p>i can take a look too, pm</p>