looking for help on my appeal letter

<p>I was wondering if anyone could help me? I finished a brief half a page appeal letter for a university that i applied to where i was denied for spring 2012. Just looking for someone who could maybe go over it and fix it a bit.</p>

<p>bump</p>

<p>anyone?</p>

<p>Very unlikely that you can get in for spring 2012.</p>