Looking for people to give me advice on my essay. Any takers?

I realize that I’m taking a fairly large risk by doing this, but I’m naive so oh well. Comment below if you’re willing to give me advice and I’ll private message you my essay. Thanks!

I’d be happy to help!

@Sparkletree Awesome! Check your inbox.

I’d be happy to look over your essay as well!

@ramennoobles Check your inbox!

I’d be happy to look it over, I’ve had to write dozens of college essays.

PM me it, I can look it over

Still would love more readers, the more the better