<p>if anyones up for critiquing it, pm me.</p>
<p>you can PM me. I will try my best.</p>
<p>I actually just sent in my MIT optional one and would love to take a look at yours and provide you with some feedback.</p>
<p>interested in reading and providing feedback, PM me</p>
<p>i'd love to help, pm me</p>
<p>ill help pm me</p>