<p>I'm done with my college application essay and was wondering if anyone wants to read and critique it. It's decent in my opinion, but I want to make it better =). </p>
<p>~Thanks in advanced</p>
<p>I'm done with my college application essay and was wondering if anyone wants to read and critique it. It's decent in my opinion, but I want to make it better =). </p>
<p>~Thanks in advanced</p>