Need Feedback on Supplement Essay

Hello everyone,

I am applying as a Fall 2016 junior transfer student to Tufts University. I have completed my “Let Your Life Speak” essay, but I’m a little unsure of the tone. If anyone is willing to read my essay and provide comments, I would greatly appreciate it!

Hi I can read and critque your essay

I would read and comment on your essay with great pleasure. Just PM me!

Sure, I’ll read it; please PM me!

Anyone else?

Ya me

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Hey! I’m a journalism junior at the University of Florida and I’ve helped edit college essays before. I would love to help!