<p>Could someone do me a favor and have a look at my essay? Your help would be much appreciated, thanks in advance!</p>
<p>PM me if you want and I'll give you some feedback</p>
<p>You can send it to me, if you would like an adult perspective. PM it over.</p>
<p>pm me i'd be happy to help</p>
<p>ya
send it to me.</p>