NEED MACHO CRITIQUE ON MON RICE ESSAY (Oops! caps.)

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<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I'm in need of some critique on my Rice Essay, which I just finished. Anyone is welcome to critique as long as you are not suspectible of copying.</p>

<p>Edit: Since Rice's app is due today, I prefer people who can critique it in less than an hour. </p>

<p>Thanks,</p>

<p>Forti</p>

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<p>PM it to me if you still need help :)</p>

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<p>Bump. (10 char)</p>

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<p>If you like ill read it</p>