Need some feedback from a current college student

<p>Hey guys...if you'd be willing to read an essay of mine and some essay ideas for the general application write what you want essay, I'd really appreciate it. I want people to read it who aren't in the application process, and who already went through it.</p>

<p>Thanks so much...that'd be a big help.</p>

<p>I never did the general app., but I'd be happy to lend a hand.</p>