<p>The title explains it.
I need someone who doesn't know me to tell me how it is etc but more importantly, how to improve it and where to cut words.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>The title explains it.
I need someone who doesn't know me to tell me how it is etc but more importantly, how to improve it and where to cut words.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>I would like to help you! :D</p>