need some ppl to plz edit my UC essay

[neginzee]

<p>will someone plz read my UC short response and edit it. it's the 2nd question and it's 600 words long. pm me plz if you will.</p>

[woeisme]

<p>sure, i can take a look. btw, which uc's are you applying to?</p>

[bresdude]

<p>i'll look at them</p>

[Sympathy]

<p>sure thing..</p>