Need some quick criticism on my Northwestern Supplement

College Essays
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<p>Anyone want to give their input?
just some quick edits before i apply
or you can just say if it was good or not so good...</p>

<p>i'll pm</p>

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<p>sure ; im a NU applicant though - already submitted</p>

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<p>thanks man i pmd it</p>

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<p>pm me... scs applicant</p>