Need some supplement essays critiqued.

<p>I need someone to critique my NYU and Barnard supplements. NO 09-ers, please. Also, preferably someone who is a beast at correcting grammar in case there is anything that I am missing. Thanks so much in advance!</p>

<p>I consider myself a pretty good essay critiquer, i'll give you some good feedback. i submitted my apps a week ago and am not even applying to NYU or Barnard.</p>