Need someone to read my essay!!

College Essays
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<p>It's about disease. Anybody want to read the first draft? I need advise and improvements.</p>

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<p>yae sure I can do that :)</p>

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<p>Me too...Leave me ur MSN ok? or u can send it to me..
my email( also MSN ): <a href="mailto:jixiu27@hotmail.com">jixiu27@hotmail.com</a>
Good luck!</p>

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<p>I can read your essay either. I enjoy medicine-related topics and would be very glad to help you...</p>

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<p>i can look at it and offer my suggestions.</p>