<p>It's about disease. Anybody want to read the first draft? I need advise and improvements.</p>
<p>yae sure I can do that :)</p>
<p>Me too…Leave me ur MSN ok? or u can send it to me..
my email( also MSN ): <a href="mailto:jixiu27■■■■■■■■■■■■">jixiu27■■■■■■■■■■■■</a>
Good luck!</p>
<p>I can read your essay either. I enjoy medicine-related topics and would be very glad to help you…</p>
<p>i can look at it and offer my suggestions.</p>