Need someone to read my UT essay! PLEASE

<p>I have been working on this essay and I would like for someone to read it and tell me if they have any corrections. If you would like to read my essay please PM as soon as you can.</p>

<p>I can read it if you’d like</p>

<p>Feedback for feedback?</p>

<p>i’d be happy to put in my input</p>