NYU Supplement help...

<p>Wrote an essay for part of the supplement, and I'd really like some feedback and help cutting it down... I'm currently about 400 characters over. Anyone willing to read it and help? Thanks!</p>

<p>Send it over. Let me know what it is about so I get a general consensus of what I’m reading.</p>

<p>I will read it and you can check mine out too if you want. Please PM me.</p>

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