Offical SAT II Writing Thread

<p>I think I put no error for that one.</p>

<p>CT-yes it was.</p>

<p>niceeeeeeee</p>

<p>Well I wrote about one chemist who derived the structure of teh benzene from a piece of art. Though I coundn't remember the chemist's name so I just said 'one chemist'. :p And some other examples were scientists playing musical intruments.....haha I dunno, hopefully get 650+.</p>

<p>yes, i'm pretty sure its the last sentence of para2...something about one choosing his friends..</p>

<p>Another one of the Error ID questions was "Neither blah blah blah were _____", which is wrong because if you use neither, it has to be was. were is used for either. </p>

<p>Am I correct?</p>

<p>yes u are...it shud be "was"..</p>

<p>"were is used for either."</p>

<p>"either" is singular too</p>

<p>which were the 3 Es?
One was Winston Churchill one
the otehr was the civil rights movement
and the third one was...?</p>

<p>What was the answer to the one about this woman discovering that American Vocab incorporated the Islander language. YOu had to improve that sentence.</p>

<p>The one before that was about improving the sentence which talked about how the Islanders were isolated so that their language was preserved. I think the answer was that u had to put "As a result,"</p>

<p>I put "As a result"</p>

<p>The sentence about choosing friends had to be removed.</p>

<p>What about the sentence improvement which had the word often moved around in the answer choices?</p>

<p>o and what about the sentence ID which was about americans eating food and they still get fat. I said "What they eat" is wrong. SO is it?</p>

<p>Don't remeber, I dont remember much from this test at all for some reason</p>

<p>me too...is it amnesia??? Gosh. I think its just the aftershock. :(</p>

<p>The test was easier than the practices I had been given by my tutor. She gave me insanely difficult ones; they helped.
I wrote about the painting entitled "the gross clinic" (I guy in the middle of an auditorium instructing in an operation; he's illuminated so the symbolism was easy to explain) and digital artwork (because sometimes I use adobe photoshop to make pretty things). In my final paragraph went on to say that even the means by which artwork is sold is becoming melded with technology and science, by describing the prevalence of internet auctioning.</p>

<p>i think i totally screwed up the writing</p>

<p>I talked about how we use art in designing and creating scientific methods and experiments, thus allowing us to broaden our opportunities and gain knowledge in both of the fields.</p>

<p>it sounds like a load of crap but i hope they buy it.</p>

<p>masterchief where di d your tutor get her tests from? a prep book?</p>

<p>does anybody remember the one about "many sweets" ? the sentence error question..
it was like number 5 or something i guess.. is it correct to say "many sweets"? i put no error.. though..i thought it sounds weird, but grammatically correct</p>