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Decision: Deferred
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Trinity College of Arts and Sciences
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1500 Reading: 560 Math: 460 Writing: 480
ACT: C:22 Sci:21 Eng:24 Math:18 Rdng: 24 Essay/Writing: 8/12 ELA:24
SAT II: 1060 Math: 510 Evidence based reading & writing: 560
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.3
Weighted GPA: 3.7
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 13 out of 140
AP (place score in parenthesis): N/A
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: IB Math Studies, IB Environmental Systems and Societies, AP Psychology, IB English, IB TOK, IB Spanish, IB 20th Century History, IB Film.
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): N/A
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): (President) 100 Wall Street Stock Market Club for 3 years, (Vice President) National Honor Society for 1 yr, (Secretary) Spanish Honor Society for 1 yr, Peer Mediator for 1 yr, FBLA member for 3 yrs, Junior and Senior advisory council member at my school for 2 yrs, (Foundation Chair) Jack and Jill of America inc. for 2 yrs., Volleyball team (JV 2 yrs and V 2 yrs)
Job/Work Experience: Cashier at Panera Bread for less than a year my junior year
Volunteer/Community service: well over 50 hours at least with various organizations and loctions
Summer Activities: Volunteering mainly and playing volleyball
Essays:
- (Why Duke?) I really emphasized how much I love their Duke Engagae program there, and how no other school has such program that inculcates the importance of charity and service to all of their students. It was well written and I got it read over many times. On the other hand, the word limit felt limiting since I couldn't elaborate on what the program meant to me personally really.
-(Personal Essay/Common App Essay) Honestly, I believe it was perfect. I really do because I have really low standardized testing scores, but still got a second chance. As you read, there are a couple of rejected applicants with way higher test scores. When I wrote my essay, I made sure it sounded like It was spoken and not written- if that makes any sense and really focused n showing Duke the type of person I am that was not included in my application already. There was no referance to my grades, test scores, how my teachers felt about, or anything quantitative or school related really. I just talked about me.
(Optional Essay) I didn’t complete it for my application
Teacher Recommendation: I got two of my favorite teachers that knew me very well to write recs. One has known me since I was a freshman and the other has been my teacher for the past 3 years. I technically waived my FERPA(?) right for both, but one of my teachers let me see it because she didn’t care really lol.
Counselor Rec: My counselor is new to me, but I made sure to get close to her and I suspect she wrote a pretty decent rec or a generic one even since she is so busy.
Additional Rec:N/A
Interview:
-I was able to be interviewd b/c there are so many alum in Savannah, Ga. My mom knows 2, and one of them happened to be my interviewer. She didn’t say anything of course,but she just gave me a little tidbit about his personality and that helped me be a little less nervous going in. It was about an hour and a half and went very well. It got to the point when I forgot I was getting interviewed because it became a converation about poltics (since it was day after the election), and IB life since he was considering enrolling his daughter in an IB program the next year.
Other
State (if domestic applicant): GA
Country (if international applicant):
Intended major(s): Neuroscience, Global Health, or Innovation & Entrepreneurship were my interests on my common application
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: African American
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: <100,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): N/A
Reflection
Strengths: My personality speaks Duke tbh. I have many goals for myself and I know how I want to achieve them. I am not a robot most importantly and made sure that I seem very well rounded. Duke is really one of the only premier universities that spends the time to do a holistic review of each application and understands that not everyone is a good test taker like me. My mom even said that my essays combined with my interview, and recommendations are probably the only reason Duke is even giving me the benefit of the doubt.
Weaknesses: My test scores. When I read my defferal letter, I was elated of course since they granted me another chance, but all I could think about was that I could have gotten accpeted and be free from the anticipation if I had a 30 on the ACT for example.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected:
I fell in love with Duke when I was a sophomore. My love maybe rubbed off on my application, but I won’t ever know. All I know is that I am dedicated in everything I do and only know challenge when it comes to school. My very stressful IB diploma program curriculum itself feels impossible and then I added an AP psych course with it. Duke wants the next big thing and students who share similar qualities of present and past students. Although, no matter how high your grades are, Duke and all other universities want to make sure that you are ready to take on the type of high-level work that is expected for all of their students.
General Comments:
First of all, I tip my hat to those that got accepted because I undoubtedly know you all deserve it. I and a lot of others like me who got deferred should be happy as well though because Duke sees something in all of us, but just doesn’t have the space for everyone. Just remember that Duke’s process is a bit weird and be grateful that you got this far in the process for this top-ranked school that got over 3,500 applications this year ED alone and you were a part of the one third deferred.
My main advice for the next generation is to just be yourself in your application and focus on something that you are really interested in and push your academics especially throughout high school. With my low ACT and SAT scores, my IB curriculum had to be the only quantitative statistic that made Duke want to still look out for me in the spring.
GOOD LUCK to everyone in all of their future endeavors!